Saturday, August 13, 2016

Paragraph from second book--Chapter 7

Editing my second Sapphire and the Atlantian book and came across this lovely paragraph.  Wanted to share it with you.


Chapter 7 of War in Atlantis; A Sapphire and the Atlantian Adventure

"Feeling stiff from hours sitting in a hard-wooden chair, Alex shifts his large frame waking Sapphire.  Slowly, she opens her emerald-green eyes to find his finely chiseled face smiling down at her.  Gently moving curly strands from her face, he kisses her forehead and whispers, “Good morning beautiful.”" 

Your thoughts?